Saturday, October 5, 2013

Liz Gets Hers - Part 2 M/F

Sorry for the delay everyone.
For those that don't know, this is a followup to the series "Shannon's Spankings"


A few hours later an embarrassed Liz was inspecting her light pink bottom in her room with a closed door. Her pjs were puddled around her ankles and panties at half mast. Fingers stroked her butt searching for any blemishes but she didn't expect any. It was only a hand spanking after all. More infuriating than the sting of the spanking was the embarrassment of being draped over Shannon's lap. But she had not gone willingly and squirmed and fidgeted every step.

Outside a visibly frustrated Shannon sat on the chaise lounge in the living room. Things had not gone as expected. True, Liz had come back, appearing penitent and agreeable to the contract Shannon had proposed weeks before. Liz had signed it after getting settled. However, when it came to accepting her first spanking from Shannon she had been all but cooperative. Fussy, fidgeting and simply defiant she had managed to dodge the worst of the spanking. Finally Liz had been able to squirm off Shannon's lap and fled to the sanctuary of her room claiming to have fulfilled her obligations. She had received her "spanking" after all and was therefore absolved of her actions.

Shannon for her part, was furious at the entire matter but unwilling to attempt pure force to subdue Liz. There was no point in an all out catfight. It wasn't her way and in any event, she was uncertain if she could overwhelm Liz. What she needed was Liz to accept her authority. At the moment it wasn't happening so she was forced to place a phonecall to Liz's dad Ron.



A short time later, Ron knocked on the door and Shannon let him in. She had explained the situation over the phone and he had been upset to hear of Liz's defiance. This was the "last straw" as far as he was concerned and he promised to back up Shannon in the matter.

"LIZ!" Ron called out. Inside her room, a Liz gave a start. Her dad was here?? "LIZ! Come out here right now!"

Liz emerged from her room after pulling up her panties and pajamas. She nervously ran a hand through her hair. "Daddddyyy," she said in her best endearing "daddy's girl" voice. She scampered over to give him a hug.

"Liz, what's this I hear about you and Shannon?" Ron asked as he held her back.

Liz made a face. Inwardly her stomach did a flipflop. "Daddddyyy, there's nothing wrong. Shannon and I just had a little fight, that's all." Her face pinked a little with the thought of her dad finding out she had been bare assed over Shannon's lap.

Ron pressed Liz backward so he could look full in her face. With steady eyes he told her, "I heard you're not accepting her authority."

Liz's face reddened further. She opened her mouth to say something but Ron interrupted. "We're all tired of you actions and it's time you had some guidance. Your mother and I debated you staying at home while we straightened you out but we also wanted you to go to college. So we arranged for you to stay with Shannon."

"But daddy, I'm not a child." Liz stamped her foot. "And Shannon is the same age as me. This is ridiculous. Spankings and everything! C'mon!" She threw up her hands.

Ron looked at his daughter impassively with a furrowed brow. "You're going to do what you're told and that's final! We're all tired of your act!" He grabbed her arm and pulled her towards him.

Startled, Liz gave out a small shriek. "What are you doing?" she cried out. She struggled but was no match for her father's strength.

Ron didn't say anything but dragged her over to the dining room chair that was shortly before occupied by Shannon. Shannon during all this had been watching bemused as she knew where things were headed.

Liz gave out another startled cry as her father sat down and yanked her over his lap. "Nooooo, daddy please!" Liz quailed.

Ron held Liz firmly over his lap. He put hand on the small of her back pressing down. She kicked momentarily but was in no danger of dislodging her self. Her hands grabbed the legs of the chair. She craned her head back towards her father but couldn't quite look directly at him. "Daddy noo nooo. This isn't fair!" Liz's face started getting red. Still wordless, her father peeled down her pajamas. They got a bit tangled at Liz's knees so he gestured his head towards Shannon. "Shannon, do you mind?" he asked.

Shannon was more than happy to oblige. She grabbed the waistband of the pajamas and pulled them down towards Liz's ankles careful to avoid any of Liz's frantic movements. Meanwhile Ron had pulled Liz's panties down. They were momentarily stuck at the seam between his leg and Liz's thighs but he was able to work them down as her kicking provided relief. A few threads of the waistband popped from the effort.

Liz for the part was continuing to protest and getting extremely red in the face. Here she was, a 19 year old girl over her dad's lap about to receive a spanking. And her cousin Shannon was not just watching but participating!

Her embarrassment was interrupted with the first smack. "Oww! Daddy stop, oww!" Liz cried out.

Ron continued spanking Liz's bottom, oblivious to her cries. Meanwhile Shannon stood nearby enjoying every minute.
Spank after spank fell across Liz's bottom. Ron obviously knew what he was doing. He covered her butt from the bottom of her tailbone to the tops of her thighs. Liz had stopped protesting and had started crying. Her butt went from light pink to red. Her hands frantically waved backwards trying to stop Ron's onslaught but she couldn't reach anything. The best she could do was reach her right hand backwards but then Ron simply grabbed it and forced it on the small of her back. Legs kicked helplessly. The spanking continued interspersed with questions. "Are you going to do as you're told? Are you going to behave? Are you going to listen to Shannon?" Ron asked sternly as he continued to spank. Liz didn't answer initially but he would pause and then spank harder eliciting squeals. "Yes! Yes!" Liz cried out.

Finally Ron stopped and stood Liz up. She was crying and snivelling now, her pjs and panties puddled around her ankles. Ron seized her ear and forced her to hobble to the corner. Firmly he faced her into the corner. Returning to Shannon he picked up a duffel bag he had brought when he first entered.

"Shannon dear, can you get me a beer?" Shannon brought one back from the kitchen. Both of them sat on the chaise lounge which served as the sofa in front of the television. They had a clear view to the other room where Liz miserably stood in the corner, hands on her head and pjs and panties around her ankles.

Drinking the beer, Ron shook his head. "I'm sorry Shannon. I feel like we're dumping her on you like this. I should have been stricter with her like Henry had been with you." Shannon felt a tinge of embarrassment at the reference to her spankings, the latest which had been witnessed by Ron's entire family.

"I've seen how well you've turned out though and I'm grateful you can help. Liz isn't a bad girl, she just needs a firm hand. And like we talked about it's best if she continues to go to college and stay with you. Your aunt and I are really impressed with your maturity. All we ask is you try."

Shannon nodded. "I'm willing to try," she said, "but Liz has to respect my authority."

Ron nodded. "Don't worry. After tonight, she'll jump when you say jump." His eyes were hard. "I've finally realized she isn't the angel she's been playing herself out to be. I've brought some things for you to keep Liz in line." He opened the duffel bag and pulled out a small paddle. It was less than a foot long and four inches wide. Kind of like a ping pong paddle but made of a very smooth, black wood. It looked brand new. Standing up Ron called out to Liz, "Liz! Get over here!" He walked over and sat down on the dining chair.

Liz turned around and started hobbling back to her father. Her eyes fell on the paddle in his hand and her face crinkled. "No daddyy, please..." her eyes welled up with tears again.

"Liz, you are really starting to embarrass me," Ron replied angrily. "You need to take your punishment like an adult."

Liz dragged her feet and slowly made her way towards him begging the whole way. She held her hands in front of her crotch, protecting her modesty. To be 19 years old and spanked to tears! And to think it wasn't over yet.

Ron impassively sat in the chair. "Quit your dawdling! You're in for a lot more than a hand spanking. I've brought a few things and Shannon's going to learn to use them. From now on, you're going to do as she tells you or else!"

Liz now stood in front of him. Instead of grabbing her arm, he motioned towards his lap. "Over," he said. It was time she started learning to obey. He held the paddle to the side providing her with space to lower herself.

Liz glanced over at Shannon before awkwardly lowered herself over Ron's lap. Face red and eyes already puffy, she had to crouch to protect her modesty as her hands reached across and she sort of fell across Ron's lap. Ron' bounced her a few times on his lap as he adjusted her weight so that her feet were off the ground and her weight more towards her front.

It seemed like a long time before there as a loud SPLAT! Her right cheek burned from the paddle. Then there was another SPLAT and her left cheek exploded in pain. That paddle hurt! Each splat made her cry out. Ron continued spanking her with the paddle. SPLAT! SPLAT! Left cheek low, right cheek low, right cheek high, left cheek high. He made sure to vary the spanks and cover her entire butt. Liz writhed on his lap in agony. This was nothing like the handspanking. She kicked helplessly and wailed.

After just a few minutes of paddling, Ron stopped. "Get up," he told Liz. Sobbing she obeyed, relieved it was over. Her bottom was on fire. Hands flew back momentarily to knead her cheeks but then she realized she exposed her self so they flew back in front to cover herself. Finally she compromised with one hand in front and one hand in back.

Ron stood then looked at Shannon. "Ok Shannon. It's your turn."

"Wha.." Shannon felt a momentary flash of panic and confusion. Was she getting a spanking?

Ron gestured to the chair as he held out the paddle. "You're going to be in charge of Liz from now on. She needs to get used to it." Both Liz and Shannon had shocked faces. Of course it was something that was written in the contract but it never seemed so real as now.

"noooooooo," Liz shook her head in disbelief. She had never thought things would end up like this. Shannon's handspanking before had almost been a joke. Something she could play off in her mind as a prank. But now with her ass already on fire Shannon was going to paddle her more??

Copyright 2013


7 comments:

  1. Glad Ron is getting involved at last! I eagerly await further info!

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  2. i don't find this spanking as a severe one actually but good job. i wld like yr next story to be a more severe spanking for liz.
    like what i said earlier i think liz shd get cornertime before and after a spanking & she shd be naked. and her cornertime shd be different and more embarassing to her so tht she wld change faster i suppose. she shd kneel by spreading her legs widely or she shd make the coin stand with the coin between the wall and her nose, if the coin falls then she have to repeat her spankings. or her body in 90 degrees with her nose on the wall the implements tht is used to spank her on the back of her body and her bottom pushed totally on display, if the implements drop then she will be spanked with the implements tht droped agn.
    as for her spanking it shd be hard and severe cse she's already 19. she shd be spanked until she's bawling and can't fight anymore. don't give her by numbers just spank her until you think its enough. at least for 1 min. based on her attitude and behavior she shd get maintainence spanking every morning and night. i suggest in the morning she shd be kneeling by the side of her bed every morning before her classes etc and shannon will spank her with her hand and hairbrush. at night after dinner she wido cornertime in the living room and spanked there with a wooden spoon and a belt. for punishment spanking it will be longer and more severe. liz shd also help shannon with the chores and shannon will inspect them and spank her if she didn't do it.liz shd have curfew too.
    thts all i can give to you. hope you're not mad at me and my opinions. thank you and good luck for the next story i look forward to it :)

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    1. All good ideas. Don't worry, you just need to be patient. ;-) Liz will get more thats for sure and then later she'll learn her place.

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  3. Hi! I read several spanking sites/blogs and was excited to see the continuation of this story. I have a feeling once Shannon becomes accustomed to having power over Liz things will get really interesting. I must admit the first story about Shannon was almost too severe for my taste and I felt awful for her due to her not really deserving the punishment but I'm very excited to see Liz get what us coming to her. Though Shannon us mature I'm sure she still holds a bit of a grudge :) Knowing that was her last spanking is a delicious detail. Considering how intense and brutal Shannon got spanked as a young teen for a somewhat unfair reason I'm quite confident that Liz will have quite a bit more pain and humiliation coming her way. So I'll leave you to your muse and wait to see what happens. Thanks for writing!

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    1. You're right! There's a lot more to come and Liz is gonna learn a thing or two!

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    2. Just to let you know, Eddard didn't write the first story--he got from another site. You can see the different style.

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  4. This was fairly satisfying, but counting on more to come! As I have said previously, I think this should have been done a LOT earlier, but well I am not the author.

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